XYZ Engineering was able to achieve key client success factors by utilizing our ability to understand and communicate Pilster Pharmaceuticals’ culture to the entire design team and keep the project on schedule, saving an estimated $5,000,000 that could have resulted from change orders. Based on our experience with Pilster Pharmaceuticals’s master specification guidelines, we requested a review of the original specifications of the project completed by the in-house design team before final approval. This action allowed us to uncover potential problems in the design ahead of time in various areas including the fuel hood elevations, electrical routing and the UPS equipment. This resulted in increased system reliability, substantial cost savings and an estimated savings of months in design time.
5. If you see more than one subordinate or dependent clause in a sentence, you can usually isolate all but one by:
1. Changing the order of the sentences so that the most important information comes first.
2. Starting all but the first sentence with the filler words: this or this is or this was due to and so forth.
Example: John Smith walked his dog, which made him angry because the dog always cut into on-coming traffic, which, in turn, made the drivers angry at John, not the dog . This becomes John Smith was angry while walking his dog. This was because the dog would always cut into on-coming traffic. This, in turn, made the drivers irritated at John, not the dog .